Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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TerryJC
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Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Attached to this posting is the first draft of the Statement of Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River. This was proposed by one of the students at Canford School and it may be decided that this won't go ahead. However, the idea is that the documentation produced by the student will provide a comprehensive treatment of the pros and cons of aesthetic improvements to the river that the WMT Staff and Volunteers can use to determine whether to proceed or not.

As usual, all feedback welcome.
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Hello

Terry - you've done a great job in extracting sensible requirements for this one. I've commented and made suggestions in the usual way.



Hwyl

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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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OK. No new comments were received over Christmas, so I have up-issued this document to include everything up to and including the changes agreed verbally at the WMT on the 19th Dec.

Please check what I have done and propose any further changes so that we can publish before the students return in the New year.
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Hello All

I've made a couple of amendment, herewith in tracked changes.




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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Only one comment; you've spelt 'proposed' wrong in the record of changes.
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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I'll correct before sending, any more comment Hamish and Clive?
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Hi,

The only thing I suggest is changing the styles to sans-serif, and I corrected one typo. I've attached the document here.

Hamish
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Hamish

Thank you, I'll make that change to all of them before sending on.


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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Hamish,

Thanks. One thing. We'll need to re-address the layout before this is published as the addition has thrown a page.
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Re: Requirements for Aesthetic Improvements to the River

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Oh! Okay. Note that I still couldn't change the footers - someone will need to do that before we send these docs.
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